The project, like i said is interesting, but your whitepaper has been written with a technical language that few people can understand easily. But this is a contradiction: you are planning to release an application which is developed to be user-friendly, but your project's description doesn't seems the same...
As much I understand the projectand don't have a problem with the language, I still agree with alot of newcomers in cryptocurrency & blockchain technology that the white paper/website language needs to be simplified atleast to cater for every individual who is new to this technology, understand it well. For example, a local farmer that wants to participate in this platform and key into its advantages and what it says it would offer would not understand all the technological jargons and this may discourage him to look elsewhere.
