Read it thoroughly and although it is a very solid piece of work, the document still requires some polishing in my opinion.
Main issues:
- Style and linguistic inconsistencies. Sentences starting with "but"; usage of Capitallizaiton where not required (i.e. for terms that are not established definitions or proprietary nouns). I would definitely do a cleanup before any major corporate presentations.
- Visual layout issues (graphics offset, for example the portraits in in the team section are off)
- Team. Either full disclosure or partial disclosure, but no aliases or nicknames. By the very least, these should be listed as secondary, with proper personal details first. Use LinkedIN style templating.
Maybe other issues as well, but these are the ones I could identify during the first read through.
Great job! It looks really good in my eyes, though im not an expert in whitepapers.
Now just waiting for the new wallet

Unable to activate staking at the moment hehe.