I am interested in one, but not so sure I'm really interested in how the current version looks. Though I am not an artist, so I really have no room to talk. If you had four or six choices of artwork, I might like one of them better than the first.
Background art: a preferable option might be just "none". Another option might be some of my hi-res bitcoin photos at
https://www.casascius.com/photos.aspx, but then again I am heavily biased towards those. You'd probably sell me a few cards for that reason if you did though, because as you may guess, I have an interest in carrying around cards that have my own coins on them.
Message choice: In place of "scan this code to pay the owner of this address", I would rather mine said: "My Bitcoin payment address is <address here>". No big fat arrow. In place of the address at the bottom of the card, I would prefer to see "Bitcoin P2P Cryptocurrency -
http://www.bitcoin.org".
Finally, you should strongly consider using the Ubuntu Bold font for all your text.
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Just curious, are you using bitcoind on your web server, or are you drawing from a pool of pre-generated addresses?