one flaw in your story


many will understand the reason, hope you work it out
i dont mind a good entertaining story but when it lacks the known detail, it might as well be a low budget, non-canon sci-fi/fantasy, rather than a action/drama/thriller blockbuster

I'm not on Social Media


Good point, I've removed it.


You might also like my second part:


A Cipher of Trust - Part 2

The next few days blurred together in a whirlwind of sleepless nights, encrypted messages, and secure calls. Lena’s case was escalating quickly. With the evidence pointing to a digital art heist hidden behind the laundering operation, it was clear that this wasn’t some random group of hackers. This was something far more methodical—almost as if the entire operation had been planned down to the smallest detail.

Theo had worked overtime with his team to trace the ownership history of the NFT in question. The piece, titled Echoes of the Past, was a digital artwork originally minted by a talented, though lesser-known, artist named Aria Duvall. It had been stolen in a previous breach of the NFT marketplace, an event that had been dismissed as a “routine hack” at the time.

But now, Lena realized it was anything but routine. Echoes of the Past had changed hands multiple times, and in every transaction, there were clear indicators of a laundering technique. Each sale had been followed by a rapid transfer of cryptocurrency to a different wallet, often one that had been flagged in previous cases of illicit activity. But the kicker was the ownership chain. At the very end of that chain, just before the digital artwork disappeared into the anonymity of the blockchain, a name appeared.

It was a name Lena hadn’t expected to see.

Julian Graves.

Lena’s breath caught in her chest. Julian Graves was her brother.

She stared at the screen, trying to make sense of it. There had to be some mistake. This couldn't be right. Her brother—who had been living off the grid for years—hadn't been involved in any of this. He had distanced himself from the family, from everything, after getting involved in some shady investments that left him financially ruined. But never anything like this. Not at this scale.

Her fingers hovered over the keyboard, as if the name alone could be deleted or erased. But she couldn’t ignore it. Julian had gone silent for the last few months—months that now lined up with the sudden appearance of this complex laundering network.

Lena’s mind raced. She needed answers, but not the ones she wanted. She needed to understand the connections, the why behind this, and most importantly, where her brother fit into it.

She picked up the phone and dialed a number she had memorized by heart. It rang several times before the call was answered.

“Lena,” her brother’s voice came through, low and cautious. “What’s going on?”

“Julian,” she said, trying to keep her tone even, “I need you to tell me the truth. I’ve found something that links you to a major money laundering operation.”

There was a long pause on the other end. Then Julian spoke, his voice cracking. “Lena, I—I didn’t want you to know. I’m not part of it, not in the way you think. But I am involved.”

Lena felt the weight of his words sink in, the air thick with confusion. “What does that mean?”

“Listen to me carefully,” he said, his voice urgent now. “I’m not the one doing the laundering. But I’ve been laundering for them. I didn’t have a choice. It started small. Just moving funds around. But the deeper I got, the harder it was to back out. They—they had leverage over me. And now…” He trailed off, unable to finish.

Her heart pounded. “Leverage? What leverage? What do you mean?”

Julian’s voice dropped to a whisper. “They have something on me, Lena. Something you don’t want to know. They’ve threatened people I care about.”

Lena’s mind went into overdrive. Her brother had never been one to make excuses, and the fear in his voice was real. This wasn’t just a plea for sympathy—it was a cry for help.

“Who are these people, Julian? Who are they?”

“I can’t say. They’re everywhere—private groups, decentralized networks. They make their own rules, Lena. And now, they’re watching every step I take. I’m stuck in the middle of this operation, but if I back out now, everything could unravel. I don’t want them coming after you.”

Lena’s mind was racing. She wanted to believe him, but the evidence in front of her didn’t lie. Echoes of the Past had moved through her brother’s account. He had initiated the final transaction that pushed the artwork into the hands of the laundering group.

She had to make a decision—and quickly.

“I’m going to help you, Julian,” she said, her voice firm. “But we need to do this right. I’m not letting you get swallowed up by these people. I’ll take the evidence to the authorities. We’ll find a way out for you, but you have to trust me.”

There was a long silence on the other end of the line, before Julian’s voice cracked again. “I’m sorry, Lena. I never wanted this to touch you. I swear I didn’t mean for any of it to get this far.”

Lena’s heart clenched as she heard her brother’s pain. He’d been trapped in a system he couldn’t escape. She understood now—he wasn’t just a part of the operation. He was being used. And somehow, the people behind the network knew just how to manipulate him.

But even as she made the decision to help him, Lena knew the stakes had just risen.

Her investigation had just shifted into dangerous territory. There were powerful people behind this money-laundering operation, people who would stop at nothing to protect their empire. They wouldn’t hesitate to eliminate anyone who got too close, and right now, Lena was as close as she could get.

With one last look at the complex web of transactions, Lena felt the weight of the responsibility fall onto her shoulders. She wasn’t just investigating a blockchain case anymore. She was uncovering a vast network—one that spanned digital currencies, stolen digital art, and a dangerous underworld.

And now, her brother was in the middle of it all.

The chase was no longer just about tracking anonymous transactions.

It was personal. And she wanted to end all of it. Therefore, the next day she entered the office and finished all investigations successfully.
And the job was done.

I did not like it.

How many accounts do you operate in the forum?