Can some review my text, my english isnt that bad, but i know i made a few mistakes out there. Or create some other text, i can add these to replace mine. You can see this as a placeholder.
I'm proof-reading it now for you
"Use our Anonymous feature to send your funds anonymous" add "ly" to the end making it "Use our Anonymous feature to send your funds anonymously"
"easy to use & and well adopted" remove the "&" making it "easy to use and well adopted"
"We need something you can carry in your pocket, just like you do with your phone." change it to "We need something we can carry in our pocket, just like we do with our phone."
Making the reference to "we" makes it all-inclusive.
As an example, during WWI there were posters saying "Your country needs you" (personal responsibility) and it should have read "Our country needs us" (collective responsibility)
I can't find anything else obviously incorrect.
Well done, souljah1h
