This saga has taken an amusing twist. The internet and bitcoin community, whom I designed this presentation for, doesn't seem very interested in these ideas. On the other hand, the big companies in the mobile phone space, whom I was afraid would think the presentation silly and unprofessional, are taking it very seriously. Go figure!
The problem with bitcoin "community" is that there is lots of talk, and a little execution. I eyed a little your whitepaper, but it was too long, and it wasn't very clear if you really have the skills to tackle this kind of problem you are arguing you could handle with your idea. I would almost bet my left testicle that you don't actually have the competence.
Edit: usually good ideas (with an actually workable solution) can be expressed within 1-5 sentences. Call it an elevator pitch.