The Monero logo on the merchandising stuff is really well done, its everything about what Monero is:
congratulations.
I like it but it seems to imply the sort of traditional model of a company providing a service instead of a decentralized network. Who is this "our"? There is no "us" or "we". You might might make some nuanced arguments about devs having too much control or something but atleast from a marketing standpoint you definitely dont want to even hint at there being a point of centralization, which a word like "our" does in this context. Perhaps just write it from the perspective of the person reading it. So that it comes of as them having some sort of stake in the movement. I might consider changing it to something like
"Because my business shouldn't be any of your business"
Not necessarily that specifically, thats just to illustrate the general idea that im alluding to. Please consider it.